We go on with the competition about the mistakes in your writings. This time, I suggest that you correct your partners' mistakes AND that you EXPLAIN the mistake too.
In addition, you will have a time limit to introduce your comments, that is, you will only have one day which will be 27th October.
Hurry up! Time is running!
The reasons for copying movies illegally is the high prize of the films
ReplyDeleteMercedes: the reasons for copying movies illegally is the high price of the films
ReplyDeleteThe main Hollywood's problem is piracy.
ReplyDeleteLola: Hollywood′s main problem is piracy.
ReplyDeleteATENCIÓN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteHAY QUE EXPLICAR LAS CORRECCIONES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
If you put yourself in te place of the people who copies movies, you can see that it's much easier.
ReplyDeleteThe movies industry are increasingly losing money.
ReplyDeleteJuana: The movies industry is increasingly losing money.
ReplyDeleteBecause movies industry is singular
On the other hand go to the cinema is very expensive too.
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ReplyDeleteVicky: If you put yourself in te place of the people who copy movies, you can see that it's much easier.
ReplyDeleteBecause the word ''people''is plural.
Antonio: On the other hand, going to the cinema is very expensive too.
ReplyDeleteBecause going to the cinema is the subject of the sentence.
It's stimated more than 18 billion dollars in worldwide have been lost.
ReplyDeleteCopy movies illegally is a way to make money.
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ReplyDeleteJuani: It's stimated more than 18 billion dollars worldwide have been lost.
ReplyDeleteBecause "worldwide" mean "en todo el mundo" and it isn't necessary to put "in"
Jesús: Copying movies illegally is a way to make money.
ReplyDeleteBecause copying is a noun, it isn't a verb.
If those films were cheaper, people wouldn´t copy illegaly them.
ReplyDeleteRaquel: If those were cheaper, people wouldn't copy them illegaly.
ReplyDeleteBecause "them" is put after the verb.
many this films are very popular
ReplyDeleteI think that people copy movies ellegally because it is cheaper and faster that lawful methods.
ReplyDeleteEncarni: many these films are very popular
ReplyDeleteBecause "this" is singular and "these" is plural as films
Alfonso VM: I think that people copy movies ellegally because it is cheaper and faster than lawful methods.
ReplyDeleteBecause this sentence is comparative.
One of the Hollywood's main problem is that it has lost market share in some places so Hollywood is looking film's stars outside America.
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ReplyDeleteRocio: One of Hollywood's main problem is that has lost market share in some places so Hollywood is looking film's starts outside America.
ReplyDeleteBecause "Hollywood's main problem" needn't article "the"
I think that the movies are very expensives
ReplyDeletethe problem more important is the piracy the films
ReplyDeleteEncarni: Many of this films are very popular
ReplyDeleteBecause "many" needs the particle "of"
ANA Maria Gil : I think the movies are very expensives
ReplyDeleteBecaus "That" is not necessary
ReplyDeleteMaria: The more important problem is the piracy of films
ReplyDeleteBecause complements are put after the noun and "films" needs "of" not "the"
ANA: your sentence is correct
ReplyDeletethank's Maria! Sorry, your sentence not
ReplyDeleteouchh!!!!
ReplyDeleteANA: I think that the movies are very expensive.
ReplyDeleteBecause it's not necessary the s for plural
It doesn't cost us money
ReplyDeleteCharo: It doesn't cost money us.
ReplyDeleteBecause "us" must be at the end of the sentence.
Because serious ness of the situation
ReplyDeleteWell done Maria!!!
ReplyDeleteMª Piedad: "Because of serious of the situation"
ReplyDeleteBecause NESS doesn't exit and it is "because of", not only "because" Ipi crazy!
It is much easy to connect an Internet line of forty euros per month
ReplyDeleteInma: To connect an Internet line of forty euros per month is much easy.
ReplyDeleteBecause this order is correct: subject, verb and complements.
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ReplyDeleteBecause of the piracy and the develop of other countries their benefits are decreased.
ReplyDeleteAntonio_elcopero_si diegui de la copa(por si quedaban dudas jajaja): Because of the piracy and the develop of other countries their benefits have decreased.
ReplyDeleteBecause the form Present Perfect Simple uses have+participle.
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ReplyDeleteThe principal reasons than move this economic world, is the money.
ReplyDeletejosekilmo: The principal reasons that move this economic world, is the money.
ReplyDeleteBecause "than" is relative to comparative
and the winners are:
ReplyDeleteLola 1 point
Mercedes 2 points
Raquel 2 point
Sofía 2 points
Juani Abril 1 point
Jesús 1 point
Alfonso 2 point
Ana 2 point
María 1 point
Charo fdz 1 point
Inma 1 point